Cracking lines

One scenario found our character trapped at the bottom of a cliff as the tide came in.

Here is how one P7 described it:

‘As the tide grew nearer, Lilly’s fear grew larger’

‘Her hair now accessorised with seaweed dripping sloppily down her pale face’

I can vividly see the scene.

I would not be surprised to see this girl writing a book in future.

Wonderful. Makes me smile every time I read it.